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2. Discipline is an ever increasing problem in modern schools. Some people think that discipline should be the responsibility of teachers, while others think that this is the role of parents. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

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Respect is one of the critical rising
issue
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 in
morden
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modern
 schools.The majority believe that
children
 should be groomed and disciplined at home by their guardians whereas some believe
teachers
 should take that
responsibility
 of disciplining
children
.ln
this
 essay l will discuss both sides and give my opinion.
Firstly
,
children
 are
a
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responsibility
 of their
parents
 , they spend almost all their lives with
parents
 and l think it is clear that
parents
 should take the
responsibility
 of grooming civilised and respectful future citizens.
For instance
,
parents
srarts
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starts
 reprimanding their
children
 from a very young age
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therefore
 it is easier for
children
 to listen to them.
Parents
spanks
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 their
children
 not becoz they hate them but just to teach them that whatever they will be doing is wrong.
Secondly
,
Teachers
 has their own part of grooming
children
 at school , which is teaching them how to read and write,
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 addition,
teachers
 are there to elevate
children
self esteem
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, teach them to work with others .
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, a teacher gives kids group work , in order for them to develop team spirit,
moreover
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 a teacher will teach
children
 difficult work so that they learn to solve solutions they'll face in future life. To sum up, both
teachers
 and
parents
 have a portion of their
responsibility
 towards the growth of these youngsters, wherefore working together will
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create
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 great and strong future leaders.
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