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These days, we are seeing an increasing amount of violence on television, and this is having a negative impact on children's behaviour. Do you agree or disagree?

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Television
 is one of the best
medium
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 to influence youngsters to learn about
outside
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 world. It is believed, children learn much faster through the use of technology.
However
, in
recent
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 past,
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content creators have resorted to showcase more
voilence
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violence
 on
television
. Sparing the thought how regressively it may impact
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 process of adolescents.
Television
 has been
great
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 medium of entertainment & infotainment for our generation. It has touched several social topics through different channels,
such
 as movies, sitcoms, etc. It has spread awareness about many problems being faced by
larger
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 proportion of our society.
Furthermore
, it has
also
 pressurised local authorities to formulate development centric policies towards
poorer
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the poorer
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section
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 of the society. It can be rightly said that
television
 has used its presence to influence children to learn and act in making things right. In
recent
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 past, it has been observed that
television
 serials have adopted
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 of getting more viewerships by showcasing negativity on the screen. Violence and hatred
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 been prime topics to discuss on
record
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. In one way it is to educate people about what is happening around them. But it has impacted
youngster
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youngsters
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 to resort to lawlessness and
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 developed habits of not listening to their parents. It has been a point of discussion with
pychologist
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psychologist
psychologists
 that younger ones get more influenced by negativity rather than social topics. To summarise, it is agreed that
television
 has
benefits
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 of showcasing
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social reprimands. But at the same time, it has
also
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effected
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youngster
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youngsters
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 in
negative
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 way.
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