Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology. Discuss both these points and give your opinion.

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discussed by many people

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these days.Most of them advocate that students are allowed to choose their

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subjects, but others oppose that they should follow a specific career path

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related to science and technology. In my opinion, I strongly agree with the

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one which provides the children to select their interesting topics, which

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help them to achieve their goal.

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of all, students should have the freedom to study their interesting subjects, which can be

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easier for them to learn and complete their courses. To add

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it, each individual is unique, just like their

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and goals. Considering the fact that if they are not following their own preferences, they might be unable to

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their dreams which

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lead them to drop their studies in between.

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themselves as they might feel that they are worthless.

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, each and every subject has its own values and benefits, despite whether it is science, maths or management, etc. There is no doubt that a nation

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everyone to do their role in different sectors like doctors, nurses, engineers, trainees. Extra for the development of the community development of the economy.

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, the opponent suggests that it is wise to

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learn science or technology as

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is the

fastest growing

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profession which

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more job opportunities once they finish the university program.

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they might get good salary, reputation and rock nation within the industry and society as well.

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may lead them to improve their standard of living, as well as the

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. To conclude, even though there are many merits and demerits in both of the points, it is crucial to support students own desires, and what they want to achieve

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of injecting others

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and wishes, which can ruin their future.