Some people think that all university students should study what are they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology, discuss both these views and give your opinion,

The university education system is one of the widened topics discussed by many people

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these days.Most of them advocate that students are allowed to choose their

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subjects, but others oppose that they should follow a specific career path related to science and technology. In my opinion, I strongly agree with the

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one which provides the children to select their interesting topics, which

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help them to achieve their goal.

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of all, students should have the freedom to study their interesting subjects, which can be easier for them to learn about

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, and complete their courses.

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, each individual is unique, just like their ambitions and goals. Considering the fact that if they are not following

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, they might be unable to

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their dreams which

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lead them to drop their studies in between.

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,

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may create a dilemma, within them and they may feel that they are worthless.

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, each and every subject has its own values and benefits, despite whether it is science, maths or management, etc. There is no doubt that a nation needs everyone to do their role in different sectors like doctors, nurses, engineers, trainees. Extra for the development of the community development of the economy.

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, the opponent suggests that it is wise to

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learn science or technology as

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profession which

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more job opportunities, once they finish the university program.

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they might get

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salary, reputation and recognition within the industry and society as well.

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may lead them to improve their standard of living, as well as the nations. To conclude, even though there are many merits and demerits in both of the points, it is crucial to support students own desires, and what they want to achieve

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of injecting others

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and wishes, which

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ruin their future.