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Some Film companies spend millions of dollar on the production of a single movie. is it necessary to spend a lot of money to make a good movie. What factors contribute to the success of a movie?

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People are watch
movies
 for a relaxed mind and reduce stress as well. A number of organizers spend lots of
money
 on the casting of one
movie
. I believe that it is not essential to earn a big amount to behind make films. In
this
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 I will discuss few important points related to
this
 topic in the following paragraphs.
Firstly
,
Money
tohas
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to
 play an essential role because for making
picture
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a picture
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 producer needs to spend huge dollars for an exotic location, costume, make-up and many more but it doesn’t mean it’s necessary. Sometimes the big-budget
movie
 has to face some failure because of a low range of acting and unnecessary scene.
For instance
, one survey shows that most
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the high package
movies
 got less response from the audience as bad performance and poor songs. On another site, a good script is the main source of
movies
 rather than spend lots of
money
.
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 story plays a vital role in a
movie
. It is the main base of the
movie
 because ,without
a
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the
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 right screenplay, your pictures get less response
also
 bad reviews.
Moreover
, the film depends on the quality of story writing not just the quantity of budget. Wealthy Films are a combination of excellent writing, well characters and audience positive response. Nowadays, many low budget pictures got high success due to the quality of
movie
 writing and chirography.
For example
,
recently
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a recently
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 released low priced joker film got huge success because of an excellent script and well performance.
Finally
, I conclude that
money
 is the source of making
movies
 but it does not mean that high package
movies
 attract
a large audiences
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a large audience
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. For the best
movies
, they should have to focus on well acting skills and strong dialogue as well.
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