The pie charts below show units of electricity production by fuel source in Australia and France in 1980 and 2000.
The charts compare how many
electricity
units
were generated in Australia and France in 1980 and 200 by five different fuel sources (Coal, Oil, Natural Gas, Hydro Power
and Nuclear Power
)
Overall
, total output significantly increased in both countries during this
20-year period. While
differences in production were never more than 10 units
between countries, Australia escalated its production from 100 units
to 170 units
. Similarly
, France doubled the number of electricity
units
to 180.
Australians never burnt nuclear power
. In contrast
, coal was always the main source of power
for them. It provided 50 units
of electricity
in 1980 followed by a dramatic growth to 130 units
in 2000. Although
electricity
based on hydro
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hydropower
power
increased from 20 units
to 36 units
, natural gas and oil-based electricity
dropped to 2 units
from 10 and 20 units
respectively.
In France
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,France
electricity
generation using nuclear power
jumped from 15 to 126 units
. Hydro
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Hydropower
power
and natural gas only made 2 units
of electricity
in 2000, while
they supplied 5 and 25 units
of energy in 1980 respectively. Coal and oil did not experience remarkable change and their output remained about
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at about
units
of electricity
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