The consumption of the world’s resources is increasing at a dangerous rate. What are causes and solutions?

It is true that
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renewable and non-renewable sources
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been exploited at
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level.
This
deterioration has
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of reasons linked to it and
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plenty of solutions as well.
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To begin
with, the one major cause is
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rise in the world’s population especially in impoverished countries which in turn increase industrialisation.
For instance
, according to a recent survey carried out in India, 30% of new industries has been established to meet the
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demands of people.
Hence
, it is clear from
this
survey that usage of non-renewable sources of energy has been escalated in past years. Apart from
this
, the
second
major reason is
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resources
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been replenished and
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water
level has
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down due to its excessive use. To exemplify, numerous reservoirs of
water
has been dried up in China in 2019, as 50% of
water
is used in household chores and in other works
however
50% is wastage due to leakage at several points and taps remained open while they are not in use, a report describes.
Furthermore
,
this
jumping dilemma has solutions as well.
First
of all, awareness campaigns should be launched in schools and colleges to raise awareness regarding population control.
Moreover
, common people should get awareness through rallies and lectures on it.
Secondly
,
government
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should impose strict laws and provide
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limit
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of
water
per house and per
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to manage
water
wastage. In conclusion,
although
there are numerous causes of
this
problem, solutions are
also
there to resolve
this
arising obstacle.
However
, it is
also
the responsibility of citizens of a nation to come forward to stop
this
deterioration.
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