Some people think high school graduates should travel or work for a period of time instead of going directly to study at university. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of both approaches.

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in future. Some people think that school graduates should work for some time or even travel to different nations for work

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of directly going for study. Here I shall discuss both approaches while telling the advantages and disadvantages of

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with, working part or even travelling for a

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isn't a bad thing at all. As it gives them much-needed exposure to the world, where an immense number of

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opportunities are waiting for them.

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, they get to know people from different backgrounds with different experiences in their life. It helps them with their social life.where they make friends for life as well as get know about their culture and traditions.

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, The only downside of

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is that it can create a gap between study and work as the individuals may lose their interest in studies. As

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in these days employers want people with all sort of skills. Not going for higher education might affect their chances to get a good

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in future. In the

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think both approaches

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some pros and cons for students. But

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think directly going for higher studies is a better option.