Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In today’s world, with the
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population improvement, the quantity of waste generated is
also
on
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.
However
, there are some actions the government can take to support
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this
fact,
such
as education and fines
aplication
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.
First
of all, people with better purchasing power tend to buy products on impulse, encouraged by marketing.
For example
, the internet advertising prompts and convinces a user to acquire the latest
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, even
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thought
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her current device is one year old and works fine. Every year we can see in the news the queue formed the day before the launch of the new
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in the Apple store.
This
occurs because these consumers are persuaded to always want the top version, throwing away the considered old phone.
Nevertheless
,
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can play an important role
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in education and applying a garbage fine per kilogram exceded per person per house to decrease the
consuption
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consumption

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and
consequently
,
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refuse. To
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, a strong
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could be created to inform about the impact related to waste, with some rewards.
In addition
, it could be determined a maximum weight of rubbish produced, being checked on the removal service, which would have a scale on the vehicle.
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acts would develop
consciusness
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and responsibility with
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own refuse. In conclusion, despite the
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of
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waste due to indiscriminate consumption, the government can take some steps in order to revert
this
situation, which includes public information and punishment in form of fines.
Therefore
, we will get the result we want either way, whether by conscience or by force.
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  • for example
  • for instance
  • to illustrate this
  • to give a clear example
  • such as
  • namely
  • to illustrate
  • take, for example

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