Some people say history is one the most important school subjects. Other people think that, in today’s world, subjects like science and technology are more important than history. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge.

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about what subject in school is more important:
history
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science and technology. In
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essay, I will discuss both opinions and give my own view about
this
topic. On the
one
hand,
history
is considered
one
of the most significant
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because it may lead to an increase
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patriotism and contribute
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tolerance between different nations.
Firstly
, if citizens know about what happened in past with their country, they will probably be proud and become more
unite
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nation
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the nation
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.
Secondly
, it is very important that people know more about other countries and their
history
because
this
knowledge may make them more understanding.
For instance
, my friend had large biases about
one
country and its residents.
Nevertheless
, he changed his mind after reading
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about
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land and understood that he was wrong.
However
, I think that medicines which are proved by scientific employees and modern gadgets are more useful.
On the other hand
, it may seem more helpful to know more about science and technology because society
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in the digital era. Many
proffesions
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professions
related to
this
field are very urgent and good paid.
For instance
, in my homeland, if a person has
scientific
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proffesion
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profession
, he will get more money and have prestige in society.
Besides
, new developments and gadgets can cause
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technological progress.
One
of the good examples is the Internet, which gave so many opportunities and information that positive influence
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economical, educational, social and other areas.
In addition
, science provides not only knowledge about
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and its living beings
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but
also
develops new medicines that may save someone’s life. In conclusion, many subjects have
impact
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an impact
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on
students’
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student's
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development.
However
,
although
the positive aspects that
history
has, I consider that scientific and technological fields are more important for students in school.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Cultural heritage
  • Historical perspective
  • Analytical skills
  • Contextual understanding
  • Technological advancements
  • STEM (Science, Technology, Engineering, Mathematics)
  • Innovation
  • Interdisciplinary
  • Job market
  • Climate crisis
  • Cultural identity
  • Critical thinking
  • Humanities
  • Contemporary issues
  • Integration
  • Tech-savvy
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