Some people say history is one the most important school subjects. Other people think that, in today’s world, subjects like science and technology are more important than history. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge.
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history
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topic.
On the one
hand, history
is considered one
of the most significant subject
because it may lead to an increase Fix the agreement mistake
subjects
of
patriotism and contribute Change preposition
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tolerance between different nations. Change preposition
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Firstly
, if citizens know about what happened in past with their country, they will probably be proud and become more unite
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nation
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the nation
a nation
Secondly
, it is very important that people know more about other countries and their history
because this
knowledge may make them more understanding. For instance
, my friend had large biases about one
country and its residents. Nevertheless
, he changed his mind after reading book
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a book
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land and understood that he was wrong. However
, I think that medicines which are proved by scientific employees and modern gadgets are more useful.
On the other hand
, it may seem more helpful to know more about science and technology because society live
in the digital era. Many Change the verb form
lives
proffesions
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professions
this
field are very urgent and good paid. For instance
, in my homeland, if a person has scientific
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a scientific
proffesion
, he will get more money and have prestige in society. Correct your spelling
profession
Besides
, new developments and gadgets can cause to
technological progress. Change preposition
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One
of the good examples is the Internet, which gave so many opportunities and information that positive influence on
economical, educational, social and other areas. Change preposition
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In addition
, science provides not only knowledge about planet
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the planet
,
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also
develops new medicines that may save someone’s life.
In conclusion, many subjects have impact
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an impact
students’
development. Correct your spelling
student's
However
, although
the positive aspects that history
has, I consider that scientific and technological fields are more important for students in school.Submitted by mar16.f on
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