Some people say history is one the most important school subjects. Other people think that, in today’s world, subjects like science and technology are more important than history. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge.
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history
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science and technology. In Correct your spelling
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history
is considered Use synonyms
one
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subject
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subjects
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Firstly
, if citizens know about what happened in past with their country, they will probably be proud and become more Linking Words
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Secondly
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For instance
, my friend had large biases about Linking Words
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country and its residents. Use synonyms
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However
, I think that medicines which are proved by scientific employees and modern gadgets are more useful.
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On the other hand
, it may seem more helpful to know more about science and technology because society Linking Words
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professions
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field are very urgent and good paid. Linking Words
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a scientific
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profession
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technological progress. Change preposition
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economical, educational, social and other areas. Change preposition
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the planet
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also
develops new medicines that may save someone’s life.
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an impact
students’
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student's
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history
has, I consider that scientific and technological fields are more important for students in school.Use synonyms
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