Some people think that because children find subjects such as mathematics and philosophy difficult, they ought to be optional instead of compulsory. To what extent do you agree?

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teaching in the mandatory mode in primary schools while it is apparent that some

subjects

, which are mathematics, philosophy and so on, are tough to grasp their concerns for early aged

children

. I will explain my opinion why I believe that

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should be optional for school-aged learners.

First

and foremost, we must consider core difficult sides to learn these compulsory studies, early aged

children

might be not ready for understanding that kind of too abstract

subjects

because catching main ideas of mathematics and philosophy requires more brain capabilities due to it can’t

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and touch

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children

’s hands and eyes.

Furthermore

, school-aged

children

are good at

subjects

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compared to the mentioned studies.

For instance

, I used to love my painting lesson as a child due to the fact that I draw real things I saw.

Secondly

, these mandatory findings need

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more concentration and time because they are tough to understand, and pupils spend a lot of time to achieve their base score.

Thus

, they don’t have enough time to learn other curious

subjects

.

As a result

of

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, learners may become feel unenthusiastic about their school and drop their desire of studying. I think it is a reason for pupils to

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because they might be not eager on studying

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kind of difficult ones. To sum up, educational organizations should give an opportunity “which type of findings to learn” for

children

and parents. Particularly,

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early age schools should raise the desire to

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for pupils. Maybe, compulsory

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are more suitable for adolescents because these fundamental

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are essential for their future

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and prospects.