Some people believe that the government should make laws regarding nutrition and healthy lifestyle, while others think that it is a matter of personal responsibility. Discuss both the views and give your opinion.

Nutrition and

healthy

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lifestyle should be a personal

responsibility

and not the

government

.A few

people

believe

otherwise

im

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I'm

going to discuss both views and give my opinion.

Healthy

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A healthy

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lifestyle is not something

people

have to be coerced into

this

should be a personal

responsibility

because

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poor

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healthy lifestyle,

lifestlye

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lifestyle

diseases will be a part of us,wholesome living is very important to keep diseases away and maintain body fitness,robust

health

includes a balanced meal and simple yet very effective exercises, individuals are required to take care of themselves because nobody has a

responsibility

on any adults

health

and eating habits,

for

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food

outlets will continue to sell

junk

food

day in day out but how well does one

understands

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understand

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the pro and cons of

this

junk

food

? again it all trickles down to

an

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individual

people

who are lazy to work out and always enjoy

junk

food

contribute to a bigger number that

are

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diagnosed with diseases like diabetes,obesity and hypertension among others.

On the other

hand

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the

government

should regulate the number of

food

outlets that sell purely

junk

food

,and encourage the population in masses to take up more

of

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homemade

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home made

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homemade

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balanced healthy diets.Creating

of

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recreational facilities that are affordable or even free for the community whereby they have

well trained

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well-trained

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coaches that are

payed

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paid

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by the

government

to train

people

in matters of healthy living combined with body

work outs

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workouts

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,Not forgetting schools where children are taught on

wellbeing

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well-being

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and encouraged to have simple activities that are engageful.

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example

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Organisations have come up with some

trainings

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training

pieces of training

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on the same at an affordable fee, institutions of learning

also

have physical education

lesson

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that

are

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very helpful to the learners. In a nutshell,in my

opinion

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wholesome

health

is, and should be a personal

responsibility

the citizens should stop blaming the

government

for adopting unhealthy conduct,good habits will always cultivate good morals

lets

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let's

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use what we have to have

a

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robust

health

which does not have to be expensive.