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Some people believe that the government should make laws regarding nutrition and healthy lifestyle, while others think that it is a matter of personal responsibility. Discuss both the views and give your opinion.

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Nutrition and
healthy
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a healthy
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 lifestyle should be a personal
responsibility
 and not the
government
.A few
people
 believe
otherwise
im
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I'm
 going to discuss both views and give my opinion.
Healthy
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 lifestyle is not something
people
 have to be coerced into
this
 should be a personal
responsibility
 because
with
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poor
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a poor
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 healthy lifestyle,
lifestlye
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lifestyle
 diseases will be a part of us,wholesome living is very important to keep diseases away and maintain body fitness,robust
health
 includes a balanced meal and simple yet very effective exercises, individuals are required to take care of themselves because nobody has a
responsibility
 on any adults
health
 and eating habits,
for
example
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food
 outlets will continue to sell
junk
food
 day in day out but how well does one
understands
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 the pro and cons of
this
junk
food
? again it all trickles down to
an
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apply
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individual
people
 who are lazy to work out and always enjoy
junk
food
 contribute to a bigger number that
are
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 diagnosed with diseases like diabetes,obesity and hypertension among others.
On the other
hand
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 the
government
 should regulate the number of
food
 outlets that sell purely
junk
food
,and encourage the population in masses to take up more
of
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apply
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homemade
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home made
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homemade
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 balanced healthy diets.Creating
of
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apply
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recreational facilities that are affordable or even free for the community whereby they have
well trained
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well-trained
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 coaches that are
payed
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paid
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 by the
government
 to train
people
 in matters of healthy living combined with body
work outs
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workouts
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 ,Not forgetting schools where children are taught on
wellbeing
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well-being
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 and encouraged to have simple activities that are engageful.
For
example
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 Organisations have come up with some
trainings
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training
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 on the same at an affordable fee, institutions of learning
also
 have physical education
lesson
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lessons
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 that
are
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is
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 very helpful to the learners. In a nutshell,in my
opinion
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 wholesome
health
 is, and should be a personal
responsibility
 the citizens should stop blaming the
government
 for adopting unhealthy conduct,good habits will always cultivate good morals
lets
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let's
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 use what we have to have
a
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apply
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robust
health
 which does not have to be expensive.
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