In most part of the world, the volume of traffic is growing at an alarming rate. In the form of an assignment, discuss the main traffic problems in your country, their causes and possible solutions.

Everybody would like to have a smooth journey from where ever he or she is going , down to their destinationS.
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alone makes one happy and interested to go anywhere in the world. The case is different today as the crowd face
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every day and it is very surprising that
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you will not even understand the cause of
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even after you pass the scene. There are different reasons why there is traffic on the road, majorly we can say
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can not be avoided in places that are highly populated, an example of
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may include; developed cities,market areas, clubs,mall and cinemas. Due to the influx of families to the above-mentioned areas,
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issue is unavoidable. In my state, we see
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situation early in the morning, because most public tend to leave their house in the morning so as to get to their workplace on time. We have another factor that increases the movement of cars slowly, the bad road is another concern ,in
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case, you will see many societies moving slowly just because of the rough path which in turn spoil vehicles. Motorcycles and tricycles
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contribute to
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, all of them are seen trying to get to their destinations on time all at the same time. A possible solution that can be effective would be, adoption of good roads by the government and regular maintenance of them. When
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is done, expansion of highways should be considered to accommodate many transportation
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