In many countries, traditional foods are being replaced by fast food. This has a negative impact on families, individuals and societies. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
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food
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,
after that person’s Remove the comma
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preferances
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preferences
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some times
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sometimes
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people
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easily
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next
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country
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obviously
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ingredients
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people
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people
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food
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the traditional
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ingredients
people
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the young
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that.
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of
foods
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country
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,
because with Remove the comma
apply
this
action we can improve our Linking Words
culture
level.Replace the word
cultural
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