Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Many people believe that
music
is a good example of how to bring people from different
culture
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around the
world
together
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no matter how old are they.
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is totally agree
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with
this
state
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that
music
can joy the
world
.
Music
is a universal language. We can enjoy the beat without understanding the meaning. The joyful rhythm brings us all together, the lyric which written
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a different language is not a problem
any more
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. Recently, there is
k-pop
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movement in
western
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world
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such
as Europe and
USA
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.
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, the most famous Korean
boy-band
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called
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"BTS" representative from the UN. They released a new song called "permission to dance" to encourage
young
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generation from
lossing
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losing
a
happiness
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emotion in daily life during the COVID-19 era. The creation of
music
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a music
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beat is easy, you do not need an expensive instrument for making new friends. You already have your own hands to start a simple beat. Every kind of
music
has
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own character, your favourite ones could be emotional classical or EDM dance or even both.
For Instance
, many street performers who perform interesting
music
on the wat home could brighten up our day during the weekend while we spending
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valuable time with
friend
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friends
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and family.
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In conclusion,
music
is the simplest way to communicate between different
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cultures
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without speaking. Not only the UN that use
a cheerful
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cheerful music
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music
to convey a certain message to
world
citizen.
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,
Music
could
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raise
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the level of happiness in life and make
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greater change in social happened.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • universal language
  • evoke
  • connect
  • diverse audiences
  • cultural exchange
  • generational gaps
  • shared experiences
  • unifying force
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