Students from disadvantaged families and rural areas are finding it difficult to get a university education in many countries. Some people believe that universities and authorities should help them so that they can get a university education. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is unfortunate that poor
students
have no access to higher
education
in many nations due to
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lack of funds.Most people are in agreement that the government and university should
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intervene
. I highly agree with the statement and l will discuss broader my reasons in the essay.
Firstly
,
education
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success,
therefore
all children should have an opportunity to
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excel
in their
education
.
Students
that are stranded with money in the outskirts might be our future wherefore l think the government should just appoint a number of
students
that must be taken for free to university. For
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the
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universities
can choose
students
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with
high scores every year to educate them
then
maybe we can have an educated young society.
Moreover
, it is possible that those who were educated by the state will
also
assist others to return the favour In conclusion ,
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the fact that the authorities must educate the poor children
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • educational inequality
  • equitable society
  • financial aid
  • scholarships
  • preparatory courses
  • educational infrastructure
  • mentoring programs
  • affirmative action
  • distance learning
  • online learning
  • remote areas
  • local communities
  • aspiring students
  • financial constraints
  • bridging the gap
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