Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree ?

Increasing the payment of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution

problems

. To what extent do you agree or disagree ? The rise in the expense of fossil fuels

such

as crude oil is a good way to reduce traffic and abuse

problems

. I partially agree with

this

statement. There are some positive and negative aspects of the hike in crude oil fare which will be discussed adequately in

ensuing

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paragraphs. To commence with, the reason behind the agreement. The

first

and foremost reason is a reduction in the use of fossil fuels. Nowadays, the world faces a crisis of fossil fuel due to the high usage of petroleum

commodity

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. If crude oil fare is increasing

then

it may result in less use of gasoline that results in

less

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traffic

problems

and abuse.

For example

, if the cost of gasoline surged

then

people change their way from private transportation to public transit that automatically reduces carbon emission and global warming

problems

.

Secondly

, moving upward of gasoline pay increases revenue for the government. That revenue can be used for the latest and pollution-free public shipping system.

In contrast

, a hike in the rate of petroleum commodities has some negative impacts on society.

For example

, in rural areas of developing ,country there are no

such

facilities

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public shipping so, they rely on private

shipment

.

In addition

, they do have not sufficient income to afford the rise in gas fees.

Secondly

, essential manufacturing companies have to use transportation systems for the transportation of the raw material

shipment

. An increase in transit costs leads to costly profit which

also

affects middle-class society. To conclude, there are several positives and negatives of

this

statement. Positive results of the higher bills are the reduction in corruption and usage of the local

shipment

system. Whereas negative results are costly essential fruit and

shipment

system of rural area.