Some people think that human needs for farmland, housing and Industry are more important than saving land for endangered animals. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people think that human needs for

farmland

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, housing and

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Industry

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industry

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are more important than saving

land

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for endangered

animals

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. To what extent do you agree or disagree? In the world of modernization and globalization, the demands of human beings have been increased compared to

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. We need more food, more machines, more place to live.

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of

this

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, people need more

land

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to satisfy their requirements. We cultivate and irrigate more and more

land

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to plant vegetables, build new buildings, airports, roads, etc. I think sometimes we forget that we are not alone

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planet. I have to disagree with those people who think that human needs are more important than saving

land

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for endangered

animals

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. I base my opinion on the following points.

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of all, I already mentioned, we are not alone on

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planet. A few centuries ago we were

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part of wild nature.

Animals

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have equal rights as humans do.

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, as

animals

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do not have

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ability to speak, they cannot raise their voice for their rights. Each creature has a unique essence that characterized it. Each creature contributes something that affects our ecosystem. Taking one of those creatures

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as

tiger

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a tiger

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or lion

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could harm

to

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the entire food chain and ecosystem in that particular area. A very good example here is

bat

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the bat

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. Bats devour thousand of

bugs

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. Now the bats go to extinction. If we do not save the bats,

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who kill the

bugs

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? If no one is there to kill the

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,

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farmers need to devise new pesticides to kill the

bugs

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that can be detrimental

for

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to

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environment

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the environment

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or even for us.

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, comparing with the requirement of

farmland

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and

industry

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, the event that protecting endangered

animals

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is

much

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more crucial problem that we cannot set aside. Without the increasing housing, we can maintain the current living situation, without more industries we still feed

us

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enough and live well. And in the

future

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if it is necessary, we able to build more facilities to satisfy us. But for

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animals

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the problem is not simple. A recent survey conducted by

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biologists

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that every year a fair proportion of

animals

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disappear from our planet and some of them are extinct. The extinct

animals

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never come back once we lose them and our descendants will lose the chance to view these

animals

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.

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, plants and

animals

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are responsible for

variety

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of useful medications. These species not only save lives but at the same time, provides the raw materials for the pharmaceutical

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.

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of all, I believe that we all need to think of the problem of overpopulation. The human population is dramatically increasing and we have to do something about it.

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my opinion, every family should have no more than two children. It will help to stop the growth of population, decrease the human needs for

farmland

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, housing and

industry

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. In a word, from the above

reasons

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we could easily draw the conclusion that the significance

bringing

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of bringing

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the salvation of the endangered animal overweighs that of making improvement of

farmland

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, housing and

industry

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.