In some countries, most people prefer to rent their homes rather than buying them. What are the advantages and disadvantages of renting a home?
Today many people are
priortise
and feeling more comfortable in renting houses,because of inflation in real estate market rates. Correct your spelling
prioritise
This
essay will give an outline and discuss, some of the Correct your spelling
pros
prons
and cons of renting a property.
Correct your spelling
pros
First
and foremost reason is people who are immigrants from other countries always prefer Correct article usage
The first
in
renting apartments Change preposition
apply
such
as bachelor,single bedroom
because of the less rent and maintenance. Fix the agreement mistake
bedrooms
Secondly
,as there is increase
in Add an article
an increase
the increase
an
unemployment, youth and skilled workers are not able to afford Remove the article
apply
dream
of owning a property. Add an article
the dream
For instance
,showing income proof is compulsory in many countries for buying property.
Lastly
,renting an apartment is easy, as it can be shown many free advertisement classifieds. For example
,google classifieds is one of the easiest and has provision of showing different condo buildings with added amenities and gym,swimming facilities with a low maintenance fee. Furthermore
,that is
why many citizens are comfort
in leasing homes rather Replace the word
comfortable
purchasing
.
Change preposition
than purchasing
On the other hand
,there are negative aspects in renting apartment
Correct article usage
an apartment
such
as for every lease agreement there are some rules and regulations in occupying the residence because owner
of the house always aspect from tenant to pay rent Add an article
the owner
on
every Change preposition
apply
first
week of the month. Moreover
,if tenant
was facing deployment there is Add an article
the tenant
a tenant
chance
of cancellation of Add an article
a chance
the chance
rental
agreement.But showing Add an article
the rental
income
statement is compulsory for Correct article usage
an income
every one
who Replace the word
everyone
are
ready to occupy the space. Change the verb form
is
Furthermore
,some residential buildings such
as,
condos and flats have an option of allowing pets because in higher standard buildings they are not allowing animals to maintain Remove the comma
apply
hygenic
conditions.
To conclude,Correct your spelling
hygienic
although
renting apartments has some negative aspects.However
, today many people who are middle class are preffering
in staying rental houses because of the affordability and comfort zone. In my opinion, Correct your spelling
preferring
suffering
i
believe that Change the capitalization
I
this
benefits of renting outweigh its drawbacks.Correct determiner usage
the
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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic
IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.
Answer structure for the type of essay
- Introduction
- Body paragraph 1 – advantages
- Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
- Conclusion
Examples to start your body paragraph:
- The main advantage is...
- The disadvantage of this...
- The main benefit...
- Despite these advantages...
- One possible drawback...
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