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Nowadays many in many countries women have full time jobs. Therefore, it is logical to share household tasks evenly between men and women. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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The table shows information about the
number
 of
tourists
arrived
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who arrived
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 in 8
countries
 in 2009 and 2010. Overall, it is clear that
the
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there were no notable changes
between
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in
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 the
number
 of people
arrived
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who arrived
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at
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in
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 every country except for three
countries
, Turkey, China, and Germany. Among the eight
countries
, France has the largest
number
 of
tourists
 in both 2009 and 2010, and there was no change in
figure
. The country which has the
second largest
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second-largest
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number
 of
tourists
 is
USA
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the USA
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, and
it’s
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its
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figure
 slightly increased, with 66
million
tourists
 in 2009 and 67
million
tourists
 in 2010. The
number
 of
tourists
 in Spain,
UK
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the UK
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, and Italy has increased
1
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million
 between 2009 and 2010, respectively. It is noteworthy that the
figure
 in Germany was boomed in 2010 with 24
million
, increased by 109% compared to the previous year. There were huge increases in Turkey and China, their
figure
 in 2010
also
 increased by 33% and 55% from 2009, respectively. Compared to
other
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the other
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 seven
countries
, Hongkong has the least
number
 of
tourists
, and the
figure
 was declined from 10
millino
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million
 in 2009 to 9
million
 in 2010.
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
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