Natural resources such as oil, forests, and fresh water are being consumed at an alarming rate. What problems does it cause? How can we solve these problems?

Nowadays there are a lot of problems that caused because of natural resourses inappropriate use.
First
of all: global warming and ice melting all around the
world
. By looking at satelite's photos we can see how Antarctida has changed for the past decades. Ice melting caused an increasing of
water
level in the
world
and according to scientist's researches the whole Venecia will be under the
water
till 2060 if there will be no changes in the amount of CO2 in athmosphere.
Also
, a lot of southern countries may take fresh unsolted
water
from the ice, but not in case it will be mized with salted
water
in the
world
ocean.
Secondly
, increasing of oil companies and producing gasoline and other petrols will provide more CO2. And the
last
but not least, our green artcherias: Amazonian forests and forests in Africa should be stopped from lambing. Those
world
's problems may be fixed by using renewable resourses,
such
as wind and solar energy and changing cars and other machines which are working on gas to electric resourses. A lot of the biggest car companies have already started the way to change their productions for some of the models by developing new electrical engines. United States have froze their oil mines,
however
still buy
this
resourse from another countries. In my humble opinion there should be more ideas on how to manage those problems. United Nations council have already create
such
comittee and should start to pay more attention for
world
's problem if we and our kinds still would like to live in
this
planet.
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  • non-renewable resources
  • economic instability
  • water shortages
  • agricultural production
  • deforestation
  • biodiversity
  • climate change
  • pollution
  • global warming
  • sustainable management
  • conservation
  • alternative energy
  • afforestation
  • reforestation
  • water conservation
  • responsible consumption
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