Car ownership has increased so rapidly over the past thirty years that many cities in the world are now 'one big traffic jam' How true do you think this statement is? What measures can governments take to discourage people from using their cars?

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Car

is an incredible invention in the world. The

amount

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of people who have their own

car

are steeply increased over these past thirty years which definitely affect

to

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each countries' traffic.

This

essay will discuss

about

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the fact that increasing

car

ownership leads to heavy traffic and suggest some policies for

goverments

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governments

government

to be able to encourage citizens to reduce using

cars

. It is true that the more people own

cars

, the more traffic jam in the city. There are many cities that are now facing

this

issue. In Bangkok,

for instance

, there was once a policy named "The

First

Car

"

which

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the government would pay half of the buying tax if that person bought

thier

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their

first

car

. Because of that policy, the

car

ownership rate was increased.

Consequently

, there was data from reliable sources shown that Bangkokians spent more time significantly on the road. There are two suggested measures that might help

goverments

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governments

government

decrease the number of

car

users.

Firstly

, governments have to educate their citizens about the disadvantages of using

cars

.

For example

, driving vehicles will lead to global warming because of

carbondioxide

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carbon dioxide

emission

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emissions

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from the

car

.

Secondly

, Governments need to invest more

on

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infrastructure.

This

development policy will definitely help

reducing

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to reduce

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the number of

car

users by increasing the usage of public transportation. In conclusion, during the past thirty years, the usage of

cars

in many cities has steeply increased which lead to heavy traffics.

However

, giving

knowledges

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knowledge

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about drawbacks of using

car

and improving infrastructure especially public transports could be governments' policies to decrease people from using their

cars

.