Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
According to my opinion,
its
better to agree with Replace the word
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it is
bad
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a bad
situation
for
some extent and go through it as it will make you Change preposition
to
to
think Change the verb form
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how
to overcome it.but some people will take more Change preposition
about how
time
to improve it. As,
I will discuss my views.
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Firstly
, people should go through bad
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the bad
a bad
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situations
face
some problems in life as it’s a way of nature. Whereas, when we get a situation
like that its
better to think about it in a positive way and make a decision on it.Replace the word
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for instance
, if a person gets a low salary job its
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it is
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he /she can try to achieve high salary job in future by doing hardworking.
Moreover
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some kind of people who take Change the verb form
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a bad
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. However
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it is
time
to think but should not think more on
it waste their Change preposition
about
time
on it as they should move on it as early as possible. For example
, if a businessman has started a business he might have faced some bad situation
as he should take it in a positive way and move on. Where he will learn how to overcome it in future any he faces any kind situation
.
To conclude, as I feel that Change preposition
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its
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face
a bad situation
in life as it’s a part of life and I believe that once you face
the problem you will gain some experience on how to face
the problem if it occurs in future and will not repeat the same.Submitted by shailjameel2410 on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite