Car ownership has increased so rapidly over the past thirty years that many cities in the world are now ‘one big traffic jam’ How true do you think this statement is? What measures can governments take to discourage people from using their cars?

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In recent decades, the number of increasing personal cars causing massive traffic jams in urban areas. Some individuals strongly agree with
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ownership is not only a reason for busy roads. Importantly, there should be some government regulations for residents to take for not purchasing vehicles. To start with, there are several ones who do not blame
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ownership for traffic
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. The reason is that they have other
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as population growth that are growing significantly and
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business owners
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prefer manufacturing vehicles
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and quality.
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producers are not managed by country institutions, discouraging
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to acquire cars may not be
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for the problem of traffic.
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nowadays are keen on purchasing more and more vehicles for themselves, even though their income is low or average. They find a way to buy to make their life more convenient.
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, they do not confess it impacts merely on themselves by way of busy movement on a road. In
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tax on vehicle purchase or facilitative bike or transportation programs may encourage human beings
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not own private automobiles. To conclude, the dynamic streets or busy roads are entailed by
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amount of auto machines ruled by exploiters or other factors
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as increasing inhabitants or cheap cars. In all cases,
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administration must
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over
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manufactures or
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