Some people think high school graduates should travel or work for a period instead of going directly to study at university. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of both approaches. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Handful

people

consider that young

people

after finishing secondary education must have a

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gap year

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for

traveling

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travelling

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or trying a new occupation before entering colleges or universities.

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essay will discuss the

befefits

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benefits

of

this

break and

negative

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the negative

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aspects when graduates do not go directly to study at university. The main advantages when young

people

spend a period for

traveling

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travelling

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or work are getting their own experience and

independance

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independence

independent

.

In other words

, they can go abroad and meet new

people

in different countries

,

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and rely only on themselves.

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, in

the

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most

of

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families

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kids are grown up where they are dependent on their parents.

However

, when young

people

leave family's house, in order to start living in their own;

hence

, these all help them to be more confident in future.

On the other hand

, the most significant drawback of

this

gap is that they lose interest to get higher education at all.

This

means that when they start earning money they do not see

necessity

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the necessity

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of spending time on study, and some of them consider that education is boring and difficult. There is a current trend that all

yourth

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youth

your

you

want to be bloggers because that

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them more fun than time in college's classes.

For instance

, one of SANP researches has discovered that 55% of graduates after spending a year

on

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traveling

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travelling

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do not want to proceed study and receive any professional skills. In conclusion, period spending on

traveling

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travelling

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or work after school graduation brings some benefits,

although

there are some negative effects. In spite of

that

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fact that young

people

get some life experience when they travel or earn money, they

also

do not want

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and

getting

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new

proffesional

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professional

skills, because they

beleive

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believe

that time in university does not bring any value to them.