More and more people today are drinking sugar-based drinks. What are the reasons for this? What are the solutions to make people drink less?
It is said that the vast majority of people are choosing sugary
drinks
with a huge number of consumption
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Firstly
, a cluster of youth, who sometimes suffer from lack
of physical sources or can be mentally tired, tend to purchase sweet Correct article usage
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drinks
, which are so harmful for
people, especially in huge amounts of liquid. Change the preposition
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This
is because they have throngs of sport or intellectual sessions during school
lessons and to cope with this
gap they purchase more and more sugary cocktails. For instance
, most teenagers tend to buy ‘Coca-Cola’ or ‘Fanta’ in supermarkets and shops after their school
hours before training sessions to increase their level
of fitness. Consequently
, it leads to toothache and health issues, where they must visit dentists to solve their teeth. With regard to the solutions of
that issue, Change preposition
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school
canteens may provide for the knockdown price different
types of natural lemonade. That may mitigate the Change preposition
of different
level
of sugar in their body, and they will have the same endurance before their training activities.
Secondly
, most individuals are tied up with their work and family duties, therefore
they do not want to waste their time
cooking some meal and via sweet drinks
they want to decrease their Add a comma
,drinks
level
of hunger. This
is because we are living in busy
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a busy
the busy
time
, where everybody strives to save time
for more beneficial things for themselves or their relatives. Consequently
, it leads to their obesity or other physical issue
with over-eating fruitless products. Change the wording
another physical issue
other physical issues
For example
, most counterparts usually buy lunch with cola to fulfill
their stomach with water and food. With regard to the solution Change the spelling
fulfil
of
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to
this
issue, they should reconsider their eating habits and switch from sugar water to protein bars or marmalade, which are healthier and less harmful compared to the
sugar-based Correct article usage
apply
drinks
.
In conclusion, we see several reasons for consuming these sugary drinks
to deal with their lack of energy and their saving time
due to busy time
. The solutions of these problems must be solved on their parents level
and on changes of school
set of drinks
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