Completing university education is thought by some to be the best way to get a good job. On the other hand, other people think that getting experience and developing soft skills is more important. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

While some people think that a higher

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degree

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attained from a

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is given more priority than relevant

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or other soft

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while considering for a particular

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, there are others who think vice versa. In my opinion, what must be given more weightage depends on the

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profile, the candidate is being considered for. For academic jobs, a higher

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would be mandatory, but for business

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it may be necessary. On one hand, many would have

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that a good higher

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degree

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would put you one step ahead. Tertiary education is gaining importance with the current generations.

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is very evident from the increasing number of

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graduates every year.

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, when a

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profile is vacant and if you do not have a sufficient

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, it may become difficult for you to withstand the other high achievers competing against you, thereby, pulling you down the game.

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, having relevant

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and soft

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like leadership

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and other interpersonal

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can throw the balance in favour of the applicant. Nowadays, the competition is very high and a single vacancy receives

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number of applications.

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a large number of these applicants would be

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graduates, it would be the

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level and interpersonal

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suitable for the respective

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line that would push you up the scale. I believe that the

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description would be the deciding factor.

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, for roles like a lawyer, doctor or

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teacher, a candidate cannot be fit for the

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unless they have attained a

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. While for running a business, more than the

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, it would be the

skills

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and

experience

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that would help him succeed. To conclude, the

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degree

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as well as

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, as well as experience and skills,

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experience

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and

skills

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play an equally important role for various

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profiles, yet the level of importance can vary from

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one line of profession to another.