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SOME PEOPLE BELIEVE THAT READING STORIES FROM A BOOK IS BETTER THAN WATCHING TV OR PLAYING COMPUTER GAMES FOR CHILDREN. TO WHAT EXTENT DO YOU AGREE OR DISAGREE ?

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Childhood is a time when most of
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 development
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, and during
this
 time our children develop skills like imagination, listening, creativity, etc. I
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 that listening to stories stimulates more
brain
 activity than watching TV or playing computer games. Hearing a
story
 being read from a book by a parent will help the toddler to improve their listening skill. Practising the skill from childhood can help an individual in his academic as well as professional life. Telling a
story
 to your child will allow you to spend more time talking with the kid,
as a result
, it can
also
 help in creating a bond between the father/mother and offspring.
For instance
, research
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 that babies who listen to their parents learn words quickly and start speaking soon, as compared to babies who have been less exposed to everyday conversation. Stories always
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 imagination in a kid, since they are not visually seeing the characters mentioned in the
story
thier
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their
 mind will try to make figures and shapes which turn out to be their own personalised characters. When a child
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 to grasp the
story
 the creative lobe of his
brain
 starts to improve, thereby, enhancing the pupil’s capability for visualising complex topics easily.
For example
, when the visualising capability is improved, a person can easily map out complex diagrams and, can even have photographic memories. Studies have discovered that the creative side of
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 was more active in scientists like Albert Einstien.
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 watching TV and playing games are easy for a child to imbibe, there is minimal
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 activity happening during
this
 type of
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leisure
. All the places and characters are well defined and
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 displayed on a big screen in front of the kid,
in addition
 to that there is
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 amount of interaction between parents and offspring during a gaming session. In conclusion, I think narrating a
story
 is far more effective for the cognitive development of a pupil than playing games
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 or watching TV with them.
Although
 the latter is
also
 required the former should be given importance.
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