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Some people think it is better to choose friends who always have same openions as them. Other belive it's good to have friends who sometimes disagree with them. Discuss both the view and give your openion.

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A tendency to make friends is always preferred having the same kind of thought process.
However
, it has been rarely seen a good accompany with a different mind. I will discuss both views in
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 I believe the same views matter to become a good mate. To start with, A human is a social animal who always like to stay with people whose ideas matches your points. There is a reason to have a company with
such
 folks that a human being felt safe along with
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of the same kind of perception. A recent study shows that a person always tries to his/her voice get to listen in the group as well as inclination to join
such
 association where equal minded human being participated.
On the other hand
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 a coworker to have a
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similar
 mindset.
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 the topic can give you other sides of the object which help you to get a clear picture of any substances. Different prospectives may have conflicts in relationships but, it provides balance on ideologies. For ,instance if someone discussion on country issues will have always
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 understanding and logic it gives you to answer
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 different problems. To summarise, Buddies have always go hang around of similar thinking which makes happy and enjoy their time with them.
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 that opposite thoughts will definitely have
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 which
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that
 do not go along with
then
 along with the bonding does not
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 longers.
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