Many people now undertake extreme activities, from hang-gliding to mountain climbing. Why do people risk their lives in this way, and do you think this is a good trend? Give reasons for your answer, and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.write at least 250 words

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Nowadays, hazardous outdoor sports like hang-gliding to mountain climbing are becoming remarkably popular around the globe . There are several reasons provoking
people
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to be indulged in these
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which have the risk of their lives . I agree with
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kind of
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which have some risks in it
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and foremost point , it makes them feel good by close to the nature . As many
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who take part in these
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is just because they want to be connected with nature , mostly every adventures game is co-related with the natural resources . For ,example mountain climbing and some other sports are in forests , oceans and so on . Apart from
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they get bore from their daily
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, they want something new to do . Even though they get frustrated from their daily routine or simple routine , they wanted to be indulged in something adventures in their
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. I think that It shows a positive trend .
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, these
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are extremely enjoyable , every person has one
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on
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planet so they have to enjoy their
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. So by engaging in fun
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we can add value to our
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, even though
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in these
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fills us with energy and motivation , it really helps us in our left
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to spend without fear and in a great way . To illustrate if a person plays an adventures game in which he has the risk of
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his
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,
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when he completed that risk he is more confident and
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in himself to encounter any problem . In conclusion ,
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engage in extreme
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to have fun and due to boredom . It is a positive trend because after doing
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person
people
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get fruitful outcomes of their remaining
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Adrenaline rush
  • Thrill-seeking
  • Personal growth
  • Accomplishment
  • Resilience
  • Risk management
  • Social recognition
  • Adventurous spirit
  • Endorphins
  • Fatality
  • Risk assessment
  • Cultural phenomenon
  • Recklessness
  • Safety precautions
  • Extreme sports
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