the charts below show what percentage of daily intake of avg person in usa consumes.summarise
The chart illustrates the export
earnings
of a country's petroleum products
,engineered goods
,gems
and jewellery
,agricultural products
and textiles in the years 2015 and 2016. Consequently
, the table gives information on the rate
of change in the estimate of the export goods
.
Overall
,we can see that petroleum products
have the highest rate
of earnings
among the products
, while
textiles have the lowest.Also
,the rate
of change in value is the highest for textiles and lowest for gems
and jewellery
.
The first chart shows that the earnings
have increased in 2016 for all the export products
except for gems
and jewellery
which has fallen by 5.18% from 2015.Agricultural products
seem to have the lowest increase in earnings
at 0.81% Pteroleum
Correct your spelling
Petroleum
products
and engineered goods
have risen by 3% and 8.5% accordingly
.Engineered goods
generate the second
highest revenue among the five products
.Also
, though there is a decrease in the rate
of of
Remove the redundancy
apply
earnings
for gems
and jewellery
, it is still the third
highest earner among the three products
.Submitted by vindwar on
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