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Some people think that developed countries have a higher responsibility to combat climate change than developing countries. Others believe that all countries should have the same responsibilities towards protecting the environment. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. You should write at least 250 words.

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Some people have an opinion that developed
countries
 have more responsibilities to fight
climate
change
 than developing
countries
.
On the other hand
, some people think that all
countries
 should have the same responsibilities in protecting the environment. Developed
countries
such
 as THE United
StateS
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States
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 of America, THE United
KInnigdom
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kingdom
, France, Brazil, Germany, Japan and China
produceing
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producing
produces
 more pollution
thAen
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than
then
 all
countries
 in the world. They ARE cutTing trees in Amazonia,
increasINGe
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increase
increasing
 C02 manufacturing in Shanghai,
producINGe
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produce
producing
 more and more cars in Detroit.
Meanwhile
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 other
countries
 do not produce as much production.
Whole
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 production of South America is the same as it is in just one California or Texas.
That is
 why THE rest of the world blames G7 for
climate
change
 and global warming.
However
, we all live on one planet. And everything is linked together. MANUFACTURING in EU
countries
 IS directly connected from sources in Asia or Africa
,.
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wWhere
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where
 factories and mines do not care about water, earth and air pollution. West
countries
 have more regulations to fight
climate
change
. They are trying to recycle more and more plastic every year and reducing
non bio
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 packaging. According to WHO 2021
climate
change
report
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 there is the same amount of pollution produced on all continents. That shows that we are all responsible for environmental changes and ozone problems. In conclusion, I would like to state that we have only one planet. And all counties should fight to reduce chemicals, gases and pollutants released into the water, land and air. The future of the Earth and our children is in our hands.
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