For some
it is required to organize the surrounding, while others do not pay attention
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how everything is managed. From my perspective, it's important to clean and organise your place, because it has
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on your productivity.
Firstly
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of thinkings relay on what is around a person.
For example
, if an individual has a lot of tasks, he will complete
this
job until the deadline only if nothing can
him. If there are a lot of things on the table,
people
tend to lose their attention.
Thus
,
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workplace gives
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to make
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work on time.
It is apparent that organised
people
are more likely to be successful,
therefore
during nowadays
world, it is
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decision of each individual to reach the goal or not by the self-discipline.
For instance
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always pay attention
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their
schedule, workplace, home and other
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waves of peace
senses of peace
feelings of peace
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of their
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, because they cannot think with cold mind
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place. Other
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of
people
do not care about
such
details,
consequently
, they think a lot about everything and their mind is
to a big dump. Will
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people
be
?
To conclude, clean and organised space has
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when another part of
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that it is not a vital necessity. As far as I am concerned that
this
organizational point is on the
level of essential needs for humanity.