You have borrowed something from your friend and it got damaged. Write a letter to your friend. In the letter: - apologise for the damage to the item - explain what happened - say how you are going to fix the issue

Dear Alyn, Hope

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letter finds you in radiant health and the best of your spirits.

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of all, let me thank you once again for the wonderful experience I had with you at your place

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month. You are

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a good host. But, I must apologize to you now because the dress, you gave me, has been damaged accidentally. Let me explain to you what actually happened. I ironed the apparel and hung it to a door and went to take a shower. Unfortunately, when I was taking the shower, my dog ate a small part of that dress and I know it was a very costly one from the band W. I apologise for the inconvenience caused. Luckily, I have checked online that the same dress is still available at a nearby store. I paid online for that and will bring the same attire tomorrow. Say my regards to your family. Warm wishes, Isha

ishasharawat2

Oct 11, 2021

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

157 words

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