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Nowadays, parents put too much pressure on their children to succeed what is the reason for doing this? Is this a negative or positive development?

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The new generation is highly competitive and to succeed, a
child
 has to outperform the competition. Parents are
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, putting so much pressure on their pupils to succeed.
Although
 from the perspective of a parent it is important that his/her offspring is successful in life, pressurizing to churn out the maximum from a
child
 may not be the correct way forward. We shall look into the pros and cons of
this
 approach and arrive at a conclusion. There are several negative effects to stressing a kid. The mental health of the pupil might take a hit when over-stressed.
For example
, according to the Lancet report, India has the highest number of youth suicides reported in the world and
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 of those cases are due to academic strain from the parents.
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, stressing a
child
 to perform more than his capability might decrease his confidence level even more, and
as a result
, the individual might perform
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worse.
For instance
, several reports have shown that over 70% of pupils are not able to perform well in a stressed environment as compared to a relaxed environment.
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 a group might argue that
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 nowadays kids are more prone to distractions from their gadgets and social
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,
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 keeping pressure on children makes sure that they are not
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 momentum in their
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 activities.
Secondly
, having a good systematic way of studying greatly improves the chance for a
child
 to find a good job at an early age and get settled. In conclusion, nowadays parents are putting too much strain on their kids to succeed
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 because the competition is huge and they need their kids to outperform the competition,
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 to be successful. On contrary to having
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 impact on the performance of the
child
, stressing out a pupil for success is having a negative impact.
Therefore
 straining the kid is not the correct approach for the overall development of the pupil.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Excessive pressure
  • Academic achievements
  • Professional success
  • Secure future
  • Social comparison
  • Competitive environment
  • Psychological impact
  • Stress and anxiety
  • Resilience
  • Work ethic
  • Emotional well-being
  • Supportive parenting
  • Achievements
  • Life skills
  • Balance
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