Some people believe that violence on television and in computer games has a damaging effect on the society. Others deny that these factors have any significant influence on people's behaviour. What is your opinion? Write at least 250 words
It is argued that presenting
violence
on television and computers have an enormous impact on people
lives. Humankind's use to follow what they watch on tv programs and series. Furthermore
, especially children
are being addicted to violence
via computer
games
. In this
essay, I will extend my point of view that the media has a damaging effect on society.
First
of all, people
imitate what they watch on tv. All the houses have at least one connection with the media device because it is the main source of entertainment nowadays. It is easier than ever for users to inform about the news all over the world via their smartphone or computer
and that has as the result the presenting violence
to encourage the viewers to feel more comfortable with that type of pictures or behaviours and to reproduce them. For example
, the violence
rate in developed countries has been rising dramatically because of the increasing access to the internet.
Secondly
, violent computer
games
have a large number of users nowadays. Many people
and especially children
use to play fighting games
in their spare time. Children
start to play war games
at an early age and that would make them addicted to violence
because they are more vulnerable as they don't have to develop critical thinking. For instance
, in the United States of America have many events of young students have attacked and killed their teachers and colleges at their schools.
In summary, in my opinion, it is not argued that the all kind of media has crucial effect in the rate of violence
in society due to the people
follow what they watching in tv and the children
encouraging to do what they learning via the computer
games
.Submitted by adsougl on
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