Some people think that universities should provide graduates with the knowledge and skills needed in the workspace. Others think that the true function of a university should be to give access to knowledge for its own sake, regardless of whether the course is useful to an employer. What, in your opinion, should be the main function of a university?

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motion of what is actually the true
function
of the
university
. The
first
side says that the
university
should provide graduates with the
knowledge
and
skills
needed in the workplace. And the
second
side says that the true
function
of
university
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should be to give access to
knowledge
for its own sake, regardless of whether the course is useful to an employer. In my point of view, I believe that the
university
should give graduates
skills
and
knowledge
for their
job
skills
in the workplace. The main
function
of the
university
should be to pour the
students
with ability and
knowledge
that will be useful to be used in their future
job
. The big reason
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why
students
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the
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university
is they want to get the essential
skills
for their dream jobs.
For example
, a student who wants to be a doctor
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applies for medical faculty. And he must
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that all of the essential
skills
and
knowledge
will he earns from
university
. He will expect the lecturers of the medical faculty teach him how to understand the patient, how to make medicine
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, how to figure out what is actually the patient’s disease, and how to help the patient to avoid the disease.
Otherwise
, if the
university
does not give
knowledge
and
skills
that the
students
need in the workplace, it will lose
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credibility in
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society’s mind. On the other side, the opinion that says that the true
function
of the
university
is just to give access to
knowledge
, there will be no big difference between learning by our self and attend the class in the
university
. As the result,
students
will think that they are wasting time and money to attend
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university
.
Moreover
, if the
university
does not care whether if it will be useful for
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employee
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or not, it means that they are losing empathy and sense to educate the
students
. In conclusion, the
university
should give
students
essential value and ability that they will need in their dream
job
.
Moreover
, the main purpose of why
students
attend
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university
is to use the
knowledge
for their future
job
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • graduate
  • workplace
  • knowledge
  • access
  • useful
  • employer
  • function
  • preparing
  • fostering
  • critical thinking
  • problem-solving skills
  • intellectual curiosity
  • personal growth
  • professional growth
  • well-rounded individuals
  • lifelong learners
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