Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Other believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology. Discuss both these views and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer andd include any relevant examples from your own kowledge or experience

Generally,
knowledge
can help people develop their living quality. Some experts suggest that university student should
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a chance to learn whatever they would like to study. Others argue that they should study whatever
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in the
future
instead
. Both approaches have strong reasons. Before taking one side,
this
essay will show some reasons. Learning whatever the
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make
students
bring out the best potential of them.
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will make them can focus only
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they like and they can gradually develop the
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of their abilities.
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will help them be able to follow their dream and become successful later.
For instance
, learners who
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in sport can choose to learn only
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that
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to what they like. They can spend most of their time
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improving their abilities without wasting their time
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attending
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that cannot help them to
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in their career path.
This
will definitely help them become
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of
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the
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successful national athletes in the
future
.
On the other hand
, studying
in
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subjects
that will be essential later
such
as technology and scientific
subjects
can guarantee that they will at least have more
knowledge
in various pathways which can help them overcome
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terrible situations in the
future
easily. They have more opportunities to apply for several jobs than those who study only what they like.
For example
, when working in sport or some entertainment industries are prohibited due to the outbreak of
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, having other
knowledge
such
as technology can help them apply in other jobs and make them earn more money.
Therefore
, owing to
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the unsecured
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world in the
future
, having several ways of
knowledge
can make their life better. Having considered
this
matter carefully, I think even university
students
enjoy studying whatever they like, learning useful
subjects
is
also
necessary.
Therefore
I suggest that university
students
should use
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the hybrid
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method by selecting not only whatever
subjects
they like but
also
necessary
subjects
.
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