The diagrams below show UK students' responses to the question of to what extent would they describe themselves as financially organised. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Two of the diagrams above show UK
students
' responses Use synonyms
of
how financially organised they describe themselves. More than two-thirds of the respondents, 76% to be exact, believe they are either fairly organized or very organized.
The table shows the information Change preposition
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that is
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that is
the Linking Words
students
that answered very organized, which is 21% of all respondents. There are three categories in the table, 'Use synonyms
age
up to 22 Use synonyms
years
,' 'Use synonyms
age
23-25 Use synonyms
years
,' and 'Use synonyms
age
over 26 Use synonyms
years
.' The first category shows that Use synonyms
students
with Use synonyms
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age
up to 22 Fix the agreement mistake
ages
years
take up 18% of the total Use synonyms
students
that describe themselves as very organized. The Use synonyms
second
category shows that Linking Words
students
with Use synonyms
age
23-25 Use synonyms
years
are 26% of the total Use synonyms
students
that responded Use synonyms
with
very organized. Change preposition
as
Lastly
, the Linking Words
third
category shows that 35% of the Linking Words
students
that answered with very organized are Use synonyms
students
with Use synonyms
age
over 26 Use synonyms
years
.
Use synonyms
This
research shows that the ability to organize financial matters increases Linking Words
along with
Linking Words
age
. Use synonyms
In
the findings, we can conclude that UK Change preposition
From
students
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "that is".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words students, age, years with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "show" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "describe" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "show" was used 6 times.
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