you and some friends ate a meal at a restaurant to celebrate a special occasion, and you were very pleased with the food and service. write a letter to the restaurant manager. In your letter give details of your visit to the restaurant explain the reason for the celebration say what was good about the food and service

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Dear Jameel, Hope you are fine. I am
traveling
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to Canada for Studies. I plan to do a
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to cover my
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need your help to search out a suitable
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for me. My studies will end up within 6 months,
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it is a short-term diploma of technical education
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University
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of Toronto. University
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vocational training, I do not want to lose
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of
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on my family. So, I have decided to do a
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to meet expenses. I request you to help me out in finding a
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if you still remember once you told me about your previous employer who
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fuel
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station. Kindly do me a
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with
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • outstanding
  • exquisite
  • impeccable
  • flawless
  • attentive
  • accommodating
  • courteous
  • prompt
  • delicious
  • mouthwatering
  • satisfying
  • memorable
  • thank
  • impressed
  • appreciate
  • grateful
  • recommend
  • celebration
  • occasional
  • special
  • occasion
  • stellar
  • exceptional
  • commend
  • commendable
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