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Do you believe that experimentation on animals for scientific purposes is justified. Are there any alternatives to animal experiments?

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The generation of safety data is fundamental for the development of new medicines and vaccines. Before testing the new medicine or vaccine, it is a global standard established by many regulatory authorities that tests with
animals
 should be conducted to understand the safety profile of the medicine, which are named pre-clinical tests. The pre-clinical tests with
animals
 of different sizes, varying between rodents and
primats
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primates
 are important to study the
drug
behavior
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 within the complex physiological system called
"in
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 vivo" experiment. There are researches that try to mimic
this
 interaction using experiments called "in vitro", in which human cells or human tissues are exposed to different
drug
 concentrations to assess
drug
 safety profiles.
However
, there is a significant risk to miss important interactions resulted from
drug
 metabolic
that is
 only possible to identify using complex physiological systems. In the 1950s, it was found that a lot of babies were born without arms and legs due to the use of medicine for nausea during their intrauterine development. It would be avoided if pre-clinical research with pregnant mice were conducted before launching it on the market for pregnant women to use. Never mind, alternatives for animal experimentation should be continuously developed in order to decrease as much as possible the use of
animals
 in preclinical studies. Until new technologies and methods are developed, it is important to keep all efforts on the conduction of preclinical research with a focus on
animals
' well being before, during, and after the experiments, that's why
this
 area is
also
 well regulated by authority agencies around the world.
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