The tradition of families getting together to eat meals is disappearing. What are the reasons? What are the impacts?

One of the highly controversial issues today relates to custom. Nowadays, it is clear that people do not tend to have dishes with their original families.in
this
essay. I will explain the reasons and what is the effects
about
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it. It is clear that there are two reasons why the family members do not eat
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a meal

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meal
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together.
To begin
with, they stay
their
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own house separately.
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is because the working place is far from their home city.
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, when individuals live in
countryside
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the countryside

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and they do not have
job
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, they might be likely to go urban city and they would like to find
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stable job.
Hence
, the families might stay
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city
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or
country
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countries

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.
Moreover
, the all members are hard to gather because they are busy. The recent trend, not only father but
also
mother have to work. As the result, they can not make
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time to get
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other in their house.
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, there is no doubt that there are two possible impacts because of causes.
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of all, the
kids
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character may be negative. Especially, their children might be
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an introvert
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introvert
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person
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.
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, the child who always want to tell their parents what have they done in their school.
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, if they do not have a chance to tell it, they
fell
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sad and they may stay
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room.
Secondly
, the member
have
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a lot of stress.
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means that they do not have a good conversation and they can not talk
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struggles. To sum up, the house is too far and they always do their working are the reasons why people are not likely to eat together and
this
effect is that children might have
shy
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personality and they do not release their stress.
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