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Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the above statement?

#price #petrol #traffic #pollution
Hereby I would like to express my interest in applying for the Postgraduate Programmes Renewable
Energy
 at Universität Oldenburg,
such
 a renowned university
among
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 the
energy
 sector, as I wish to continue my academic path and to specialize my expertise within the area where I started my professional career. I am Industrial Engineer
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at
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 Universidade de Fortaleza in 2016 and I have
also
 concluded a Master of Business Administration in Project Management in 2019, which has pleasantly surprised me with wide lessons and good practices that can be applied. During my professional journey, I have always pursued to achieve higher levels and stand out in the competitive job market. In order to enrich my curriculum, I count on several courses and certifications,
such
 as Black Belt Lean Six Sigma, 6 Sigma for Design and APQP4Wind. My
first
 contact with the
energy
 sector was in 2015
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 when I started to work at Aeris
Energy
 as an intern and worked my way until
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 engineer position. Aeris is a wind blade manufacturer with more than 5000 employees and has produced thousands of blades worldwide for important players in
wind
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 market,
such
 as Vestas, Siemens Gamesa, Nordex, GE and Acciciona. At Aeris, I have played many roles, the main ones where Change Management Leader and Product Engineer. In both positions, I was the client person-of-contact to receive
customer’s
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 requirements and to ensure they would be met, by analyzing the impacts and planning the implementation along with other teams. The renewable
energy
 field is a recent industry and amazes me
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 part of its history and presents a lot of space for research, studies and improvements. There is still a huge journey toward a sustainable world, especially
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 developing countries that
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a
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great potential but suffers
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lack
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 of investments. I am looking for an opportunity abroad to learn from a reference institution and country being able to give my contribution to the
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.
Besides
 that, PPRE was highly recommended by previous work colleagues who attended the master at Oldenburg University and encouraged me to apply. I cherish to have international experiences and learn new languages. I have lived in Germany for 1 and a half years as a scholarship holder from the Brazilian Government and DAAD in 2014 and I was part of
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 School program in the USA in 2008.
Consequently
, I speak Portuguese and English fluently, and Intermediate level of German and Spanish. Those experiences abroad enlightened me to respect and admire the world’s differences and cultures. I consider myself self-motivated, adaptable and a goal-oriented person, I am
also
 known for my planning skills and correct
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. I enjoy having new experiences and I am always looking for
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next
 challenge. I believe the best way to grow is when I step out
my
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 comfort zone. The opportunity to be part of the SuRE program would be life-changing to my professional and academic career. I would be
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 to represent my nation, gender and class by being fully engaged and committed to the results and success of the project.
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