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You saw an advertisement in the paper for a property management position at an apartment complex. Write a letter to express your interest. Include: Why you are writing Your suitability for the role How you would approach the position

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Dear Sir, I am writing
this
 letter in relation to the opening for
position
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the position
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 of property management at
UCOL
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the UCOL
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 complex. I saw
this
 job ad in an advertisement in the newspaper and I thought that I should give it a go. At the moment I am working as a real estate agent in Burkley fields, north of Wellington. I have been in
this
 business for about five years now.
This
 has allowed me to explore all the possible areas to which I could cater to and
this
in turn
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 would provide me
a
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competitive edge over the other property dealers. I have acquaintances with the most picturesque location in the surrounding area, which could rather make me a suitable candidate for
this
 profile. I am a very hardworking, persuasive, eloquent person when it comes in terms of making deals with
the
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clients. My track records are well-suited proof for
this
. I would approach
this
 position with the same dedication as I have done before. I have attached my updated resume along with
this
 letter, could you please go through it. I hope to hear from you soon. yours faithfully, Neethu Babu
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • property management
  • apartment complex
  • relevant experience
  • suitability
  • proactive approach
  • maintenance
  • tenant relations
  • administrative skills
  • multitasking
  • professional development
  • customer service
  • occupancy rates
  • budget management
  • preventive maintenance
  • conflict resolution
  • lease agreements
  • on-site management
  • organizational skills
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