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Economic growth in recent years made some people in both developed countries and developing countries richer. However, research shows that while people in developing countries are happier, people in developed countries seem not happier than before. What does this happen? What can we learn from it?

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The economy is grown recently which made people become richer than in the past.
Otherwise
, some scientists found out the happiness level of developed
countries
 is lower than in developing
countries
. In
this
 essay, I will demonstrate the causes and the solutions that can tackle
this
 issue.
First
 of all,
countries
is
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 sufficient wealth which tends to the materialistic society. Citizens as a workaholic often neglect their family to overtime work that creates the domestic conflict among members in the small families.
Moreover
, it is easier understanding to parents spend less time for caring their children and impose much pressure on their partners.
Furthermore
, women in developed
countries
 like the US, UK usually tend to get married late which affect their health and their children’s ability that according to the guardian. In developing
countries
, people are becoming richer which can address the necessitate spending as electricity bill, house fee,…
In addition
, they
also
 look after their children and elderly parents well by hiring nannies, baby sisters and provide enough nutrition.
Besides
, students can take an opportunity to immerse themselves in a professional learning environment while health care service can be improved by the government to deter widespread diseases, protect citizens and accelerate the state benefits. If people have less pressure and release stress by travelling or shopping, their lives become happier and comfortable. In conclusion, there are all the reasons above, I would like to recommend that we should work-life balance and
also
 spending more time for family,
although
 they are wealthy. The most reason that family is the best destination after hard-working day and
this
 is
also
 a place for personal relaxation.
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