You have recently bought a piece of equipment for your kitchen but it did not work. You phoned the shop but no action was taken. Write a letter to the shop manager. In your letter: describe the problem with the equipment explain what happened when you phoned the shop say what you would like the manager to do

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Dear Sohail, Hope you are fine; I want to inform you that I recently moved to a new locality in Wapda Town. As the town is gated with a security facility I am quite relaxed to move here. As you know, I am very conscious about dwelling security because my family lives alone during my outstation stay. So, I was in search of a house which should be situated in a gated society with security guards.

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facilities. House is bigger than the old one, there is a separate parking slot for guests. Market, hospital and school are within walking distance. My wife and kids like it too much as they can reach school earlier by foot without traffic hazards. I hereby invite you and your family

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coming Sunday to have lunch and visit my new house. I shall be very glad, if you can bring your parents to dinner because your mother is an interior designer, maybe she can suggest some tips for decoration to my wife. Best wishes Rehan Liaqat

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

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Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

178 words

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