Smoking is a major cause of serious illness and death throughout the world today. In the interest of the public health, governments should ban cigarettes and other tobacco products. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

For many centuries smoking

tobacco

and

it

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products

has

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been a pandemic that has

plaqued

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plagued

the world. As

such

, the health of many has suffered due to

it

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its

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direct or indirect effect on the general health of the public, because smoking is the underlining cause of most diseases.

Therefore

I agree that

tobacco

use should be completely banned by the government.

Firstly

, the most prominent effect of

Tobacco

is on

the

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health.

For

instance

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the WHO statistics

shows

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that smoking cigarette is one of the leading modifiable cause of many diseases, by destroying important cells and by

extention

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extension

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organs of the body and

hereby

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causing a reduced life span. Passive smoking of

tobacco

by hanging around smokers is

also

as bad as actively smoking, causing children and people with respiratory diseases like asthma to be unsafe. In all the use of

tobacco

should be restricted to

aviod

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avoid

early death and improve life span. It is one of the main

cause

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of fire accidents in many homes

hereby

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thereby

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leading to loss of lives and properties.

For instance

, in Europe where cigarette smoking is on the high, many

smoker

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smokers

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have slept off smoking or forgotten to properly

dispose

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it, and by that have set themselves and the whole house on fire.

This

shows that smoking is a bad

habbit

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habit

that needs to be prohibited to

further

protect valuables and lives. To conclude, it is obvious that the bad done by

Tobacco

especially cigar smoking is of a negative effect compared to the feeling from

temporary

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release of endorphin. To

this

end, I strongly stand with the ban of it, so that we can longer preserve lives and eliminate one of the many causes of fire incidents.