nowadays many people choose to be self employed rather tahn to work for a company or organization. why might this be the case? what could be the disadvantage of bring self employed?

In the contemporary era, people are showing more like on starting their own company as well as they tend to show less interest to
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organisation. While
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others think , it
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some negative progress to run
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office alone. In, the forthcoming essay, I will try to explain some reasons behind
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thought and
also
drawbacks.
To begin
with, perhaps, the predominant reason is that ,
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pressure on the workplace and long hours. For that reason, a person who
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for any firm like, banks,
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companies,
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need to
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of forces with 12 to 15 hours
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time,
thus
, they cannot enjoy any dwells.
For example
, one of my uncles who works for a private company , he never able to attain any family functions because of heavy
work
responsibilities.
As a result
, the individual
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if they stat something for their own , they can enjoy family time and
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me time.
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that
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it has some bad development because set up own firm a person faces all the conveniences like, facing all problems alone with single hands ,
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, they feel
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and lose their enthusiastic power.
Secondly
, a strain
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to take all the risks and
also
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hour. If it is going well he / she can make profits or not they will be at loss. To conclude, nowadays everyone wants to be their own boss, like
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freely, only open up their own office gives
then
this
freedom but it is true, they have face all the barriers alone.
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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic

IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.

Answer structure for the type of essay

  • Introduction
  • Body paragraph 1 – advantages
  • Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
  • Conclusion

Examples to start your body paragraph:

  • The main advantage is...
  • The disadvantage of this...
  • The main benefit...
  • Despite these advantages...
  • One possible drawback...

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