The graphs below show the number of medals won by the top five countries in the summer and winter Olympics. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graphs below show the number of medals won by the top five countries in the summer and winter Olympics.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar charts illustrate the employment
ratio
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men and women in three distinct countries (Canada, South Korea, and Sweden) in the year 2005 and 2015. It is measured in percentage.
Overall
,
it is clear that
the number of men employed in all
the
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three countries
were
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higher as compared to the female
ratio
. Focusing on the first bar chart, Sweden ranked first having the most employment rate, as more than 40% of
female
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worked in an organization,
while
the male count was near
to
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80%.
However
, South Korea had the least women employment rate but
in contrast
to that, more than 75% male crowd were working in 2005.
In addition
to that, Canada had the least gap between male and female working
ratio
. In 2015, South Korea jumped to the first position by having more than 80% and 35% rates in males and females respectively. Canada and Sweden shared the same
ranked
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at 70% in
male
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the male
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ratio
and a similar trend is visible in
women
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the women
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ratio
.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words ratio with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "ratio" was used 5 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • medal tally
  • top-performing countries
  • notable differences
  • highlight trends
  • summer vs. winter Olympics
  • significant differences
  • overall performance
  • comparative analysis
  • dominance in events
  • athletic prowess
  • statistical comparison
  • consistency in winning
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