Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for a company or organization. Why might this be the case? What could be the disadvantages of being self-employed?

Currently, there are numerous reasons in choosing an occupation
such
as income, company’s reputation as well as privileges.
Most
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population
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populations
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have the increasing tendency to be self-employed more than
work
under a government’s job or public companies. The following essay will examine the main reason for people to select
this
kind of task, I will describe the drawback of
this
statement. To being with, the dominant reason
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self-employment is a
work
-life balance.
This
purpose contributes
people
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to people
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that not pay attention strictly to
work
and has
also
more leisure
time
.
For example
, I have been in
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a public
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organization which scope of
task
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the task
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are difficult, various as well as high competition, I had to do as
a
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shift
work
and spend a long
time
in the office.
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routine affects to did not have enough
time
to look after
myself
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and became
to
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be a hospital after I resigned from my job, I spend much
time
to do
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activities
such
as exercise, cookery and
also
learn a new
skill
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whatever can develop my brain all the
time
.
Therefore
, having own business or being
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freelance is suitable in
this
way.
On the other hand
, it has a remained drawback in being self-employed
that is
lack of socializing and privilege including stability.
Firstly
,
human
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generally works and spend much
time
at home, so they will have low-level in communication with others. To illustrate
this
, when they
work
at
organization
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the organization
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, they will have
a
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good communication with their president and colleges because an office provides these skills for coworkers to enhance
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or be expertise.
In addition
,
this
sort of task has a
highly
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risk due to no liquidity and less privilege. For
instant
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, all over the world is facing
this
problem due to happening the coronavirus epidemic, most
company
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companies
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are closed down and
also
cannot overcome
this
circumstance. In conclusion, there
is
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both sides
of
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altering
this
kind of occupation. Indeed, they should choose carefully and deliberate.
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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic

IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.

Answer structure for the type of essay

  • Introduction
  • Body paragraph 1 – advantages
  • Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
  • Conclusion

Examples to start your body paragraph:

  • The main advantage is...
  • The disadvantage of this...
  • The main benefit...
  • Despite these advantages...
  • One possible drawback...

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • self-employed
  • company
  • organization
  • freedom
  • independence
  • income potential
  • flexibility
  • working hours
  • working location
  • passions
  • interests
  • decision-making
  • business practices
  • disadvantages
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