Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for a company or organization. Why might this be the case? What could be the disadvantages of being self-employed?
Currently, there are numerous reasons in choosing an occupation
such
as income, company’s reputation as well as privileges. Most
Add an article
The most
population
have the increasing tendency to be self-employed more than Fix the agreement mistake
populations
work
under a government’s job or public companies. The following essay will examine the main reason for people to select this
kind of task, I will describe the drawback of this
statement.
To being with, the dominant reason of
self-employment is a Change preposition
for
work
-life balance. This
purpose contributes people
that not pay attention strictly to Change preposition
to people
work
and has also
more leisure time
. For example
, I have been in public
organization which scope of Add an article
a public
the public
task
are difficult, various as well as high competition, I had to do as Add an article
the task
a task
a
shift Remove the article
apply
work
and spend a long time
in the office. These
routine affects to did not have enough Change the determiner
This
time
to look after myself
and became Change the pronoun
me
to
be a hospital after I resigned from my job, I spend much Fix the infinitive
apply
time
to do
activities Change the verb form
doing
such
as exercise, cookery and also
learn a new skill
whatever can develop my brain all the Fix the agreement mistake
skills
time
. Therefore
, having own business or being a
freelance is suitable in Remove the article
apply
this
way.
On the other hand
, it has a remained drawback in being self-employed that is
lack of socializing and privilege including stability. Firstly
, human
generally works and spend much Add an article
a human
time
at home, so they will have low-level in communication with others. To illustrate this
, when they work
at organization
, they will have Add an article
the organization
an organization
a
good communication with their president and colleges because an office provides these skills for coworkers to enhance Remove the article
apply
ability
or be expertise. Correct pronoun usage
their ability
In addition
, this
sort of task has a highly
risk due to no liquidity and less privilege. For Change the adverb
high
instant
, all over the world is facing Add an article
an instant
this
problem due to happening the coronavirus epidemic, most company
are closed down and Change to a plural noun
companies
also
cannot overcome this
circumstance.
In conclusion, there is
both sides Change the verb form
are
of
altering Change preposition
to
this
kind of occupation. Indeed, they should choose carefully and deliberate.Submitted by tugsaphorn.sun on
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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic
IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.
Answer structure for the type of essay
- Introduction
- Body paragraph 1 – advantages
- Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
- Conclusion
Examples to start your body paragraph:
- The main advantage is...
- The disadvantage of this...
- The main benefit...
- Despite these advantages...
- One possible drawback...