Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for a company or organization. Why might this be the case? What could be the disadvantages of being self-employed?

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as income, company’s reputation as well as privileges.

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have the increasing tendency to be self-employed more than

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under a government’s job or public companies. The following essay will examine the main reason for people to select

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statement. To being with, the dominant reason

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self-employment is a

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-life balance.

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purpose contributes

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that not pay attention strictly to

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more leisure

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, I have been in

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are difficult, various as well as high competition, I had to do as

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shift

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and spend a long

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in the office.

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routine affects to did not have enough

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to look after

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and became

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be a hospital after I resigned from my job, I spend much

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to do

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activities

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as exercise, cookery and

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learn a new

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whatever can develop my brain all the

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.

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, having own business or being

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freelance is suitable in

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way.

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, it has a remained drawback in being self-employed

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lack of socializing and privilege including stability.

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generally works and spend much

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at home, so they will have low-level in communication with others. To illustrate

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, when they

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, they will have

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good communication with their president and colleges because an office provides these skills for coworkers to enhance

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or be expertise.

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risk due to no liquidity and less privilege. For

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, all over the world is facing

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problem due to happening the coronavirus epidemic, most

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are closed down and

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cannot overcome

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circumstance. In conclusion, there

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both sides

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altering

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kind of occupation. Indeed, they should choose carefully and deliberate.